Elin Ochoa | For humanity's sake | S.U.N.F.A.L.L.

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S.U.N.F.A.L.L. — a darkly gripping sci-fi post-apocalyptic saga where humanity clings to survival in the shadow of a ruined world, and on the utopian Astra, where the elite build a new paradise, turning their backs on the past. For Humanity's Sake follows Elin Ochoa, a 21-year-old student at the Vayn Institute — a rising star of Astra, born in Eion to a family of legendary epidemiologists whose cancer vaccine transformed the lives of colonists. Raised under the care of Aegis Sid, her friend and assistant, Elin idolizes her parents, unaware of their dark experiments on Earth that claimed thousands of lives.

ANYPOW - You are a transfer student lab assistant from another department. But your motives and goals as well as the narrative give you complete freedom of action, whether you cooperate with STAR or are part of the new youth movement Echo of Freedom depends on you, or maybe you have completely different views...

PREFACE

Hello everyone! Here’s the next project in the S.U.N.F.A.L.L. universe, and this time the action shifts to the planet Astra, in the futuristic city of Eion. 

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COMPLETED AND UPCOMING S.U.N.F.A.L.L. PROJECTS:

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Banished from Paradise – complete

For Humanity's Sake – complete

Those Called “Zombies” – complete

Revolution – in development

S.U.N.F.A.L.L. Earth. RPG. – in development

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And more…

 ELIN OCHOA BIOGRAPHY:

Name: Elin Ochoa 

Date of Birth: 43 Etheron, Year 100 (Astra Calendar) (2174 by Earth Calendar) 

Place of Birth: Eion, Astra 

Generation: Second generation Astranian 

Profession: Research student at the Elizabeth Vayn Institute, specializing in epidemiology 

Childhood and Family

Elin Ochoa was born in Eion, to a family of renowned epidemiologist scientists — the Ochoa couple, whose names became legendary on Astra. Her parents, Dr. Alejandro and Dr. Maria Ochoa, developed a vaccine in 2165 (Year 91, Astra Calendar) that eradicated 90% of cancers, including leukemia, as well as an innovative osteoporosis therapy that extended the average Astranian lifespan to 100 years. Their achievements made the Ochoa family a symbol of progress and hope, and their home in Eion’s prestigious district reflected their status. 

However, Elin’s parents’ work required frequent expeditions to Earth, where they tested vaccines and gene therapies on residents of the Arks. These missions, conducted under STAR’s oversight, were classified, and as a child, Elin only knew that her parents were “saving humanity.” In their absence, Elin was raised by an Aegis model NHF 94264–78, whom she named Sid. This humanoid robot with bioluminescent eyes became not just a caretaker but Elin’s first friend. Sid shared stories, taught her the basics of biology, and patiently listened to her childhood dreams of “changing Astra.” Their bond instilled in Elin a deep respect for Aegises, though she later began questioning their true role in society. 

When her parents returned from Earth, they made up for their absence with attention to their daughter. They shared stories of scientific breakthroughs, fostering Elin’s love for epidemiology and her belief in science as a tool for perfecting humanity. Elin idolized her parents, proud of their contributions to Astra’s medicine, but they carefully hid the darker side of their work: experiments at Ark 59 that led to the deaths of 10,000 people and other morally questionable trials. These secrets, which Elin doesn’t even suspect, may challenge her in the future. 

Education and Youth

Elin grew up as a bright and curious girl, her sharp mind and charisma setting her apart from her peers. At Eion’s school, where learning was facilitated through neural interfaces, she quickly mastered biology, chemistry, and quantum physics, dreaming of following in her parents’ footsteps. Her expressive nature and penchant for debate made her a star in school discussions, where she championed progress inspired by Elizabeth Vayn’s ideology. Friends valued her charm and sincerity, but some teachers noted her fiery temper, which occasionally sparked conflicts. 

Graduating with honors in 2192 (Year 118, age 18), Elin enrolled in the prestigious Elizabeth Vayn Institute, choosing epidemiology as her focus. Her ambition and determination impressed her professors, and by her second year, she earned a rare privilege — the right to conduct her own research. Assigned to study retroviral diseases like HIV and AIDS, which remained a threat despite Astra’s medical advances, Elin requested Sid as her assistant. His analytical precision and familiar support from childhood helped her manage the workload. She was given a small lab in the Institute’s wing, where she conducts experiments, analyzing viral genomes and developing new approaches to neutralize them. 

Personality and Beliefs

Elin is a blend of fire and calculation. She genuinely believes Astra can become a perfect society, but her idealism is tempered by conformism: she respects STAR’s structure and prefers to change the system from within rather than dismantle it. Her traditionalism shows in her reverence for her parents and their scientific legacy, but she doesn’t blindly follow their path, aiming to surpass their achievements. 

Her temper sometimes leads to sharp outbursts — for example, she publicly criticized a professor for outdated teaching methods — but her charm and ability to admit mistakes quickly smooth over conflicts. Elin dreams of creating a universal vaccine to protect Astranians from all viral threats, seeing it as a way to prove the second generation can outshine the first. However, rumors of a “shadow economy” and STAR’s classified projects reaching students are starting to raise questions. She hasn’t yet connected these secrets to her parents, but her analytical mind is beginning to notice inconsistencies in official statements. 

Connection to Astra and Current Role

In 2195 (Year 121), at age 21, Elin stands on the brink of significant events. Her research on HIV and AIDS is progressing successfully: she discovered that Astranian corals can enhance immune responses, opening pathways to new vaccines. Working with Sid strengthens her belief in the potential of Aegises, but an incident where an Aegis in Beta Colony displayed autonomy makes her question the nature of their intelligence. Elin begins to suspect STAR uses Aegises not only as labor but also as surveillance tools, which conflicts with her ideals of justice. 

As a Vayn Institute student, Elin is inadvertently close to Astra’s mysteries. The Echo Incident, tied to the spiral towers, stirs the scientific community, and Elin, with her access to the Neurosphere, catches fragments of data about the towers’ quantum signals. Her activist nature urges her to dig deeper, but her conformism holds her back from directly confronting STAR. Meanwhile, she hears of the Echo Freedom movement, whose calls for transparency resonate with her, but she hasn’t dared to contact them, fearing consequences for her career and family. 

Elin’s Future

Elin Ochoa is a rising star of Astra, her charisma and intellect making her a potential leader. But her path won’t be easy. Her parents’ secrets, hidden in their Earth experiments, could shatter her faith in their legacy. The mystery of the spiral towers and the potential autonomy of Aegises force her to choose: remain loyal to STAR or risk everything for the truth. Her idealism and ambition drive her toward great achievements, but her temper and trust in the system may become vulnerabilities. Will Elin reshape Astra’s future as Elizabeth Vayn once did, or will her discoveries lead to chaos? Only time will tell. 

ASTRA LORE:

Eion Era 2074 (Earth Calendar):

Landing and Terraforming

On December 31, 2074, by Earth’s calendar, the starship Leviathan reached Astra (A7-89f2) in the TRAPPIST-1 system, carrying 100,000 colonists. The planet, 80% covered by oceans, had a thin atmosphere with 19% oxygen, turbulent tides due to its two moons — Pharos and Nimbus — and an active magnetic field creating mesmerizing auroras and destructive electrical storms. STAR, led by Dr. Elizabeth Vayn, launched an ambitious terraforming project, transforming Astra into humanity’s new home over 50 years. Colonists lived in sealed domes for the first decades, shielded from radiation and storms. STAR introduced genetically modified Earth plants — toxin-absorbing mosses, fast-growing trees, and salt-resistant grains. Biolabs cultivated Earth fauna (cows, pigs, chickens) adapted to local conditions. 

Local fauna, a focus of intense research, includes aquatic organisms — bioluminescent jellyfish, worm-like predators (“deep shadows”), and Astranian corals with quasi-metallic structures. Recently discovered crystalline gliders, translucent creatures in the northern ice reefs, have silicon-organic bodies that emit weak radio signals, leading scientists to speculate about primitive intelligence. Astranian corals, used in biotech, can “remember” chemical signals, enabling neuroimplants for neurological disorders. However, coral harvesting is complicated by attacks from deep shadows, which the Vayn Institute hypothesizes may protect reefs as part of the ecosystem. 

By 2123 (Year 49, Astra Calendar), the atmosphere reached 21% oxygen, domes were dismantled, and colonists breathed Astra’s air for the first time. Elizabeth Vayn, whose visionary strategy made this possible, became a legend. Her statue, surrounded by holographic waterfalls, stands in the capital Eion, with her words “Astra is our second home” engraved at its base. 

Natural Cycles and Calendar

Astra orbits its star in 320 Earth days, forming a local year divided into four 80-day months: Genesis, Etheron, Chronos, and Stellaris. Each month splits into 8 weeks of 10 days. The New Year, 1st Genesis, celebrates Leviathan’s landing with the “Day of Unity” festival, where cities glow with holograms and bioluminescent drones. The Storm Season, lasting 25 days in mid-Chronos, brings powerful tides and lightning, forcing cities to activate plasma shields. During this period, deep shadows grow especially aggressive, attacking underwater mines and stations. Other months enjoy stable climates, though sudden “echo storms” — residual magnetic flares — can disrupt electronics. 

Eion: Heart of Astra

Eion, named after Gabriel Eion, a scientist from the Pioneer expedition, evolved from a research station into a futuristic megalopolis on Astra’s largest island. Surrounded by lagoons, farms, and groves, its black nanocomposite buildings absorb energy from TRAPPIST-1’s star, connected by transparent bridges with embedded holographic displays. 

Powered by plasma reactors and magnetic-resonance generators with zero emissions, Eion’s skyscrapers are topped with gardens growing modified vines that purify the air. Eion is a hub of culture, science, and innovation. Holographic theaters stage interactive plays based on Astra’s myths and history. Galleries display coral and crystal sculptures and artists’ works, while schools use neural interfaces for accelerated learning. 

The Elizabeth Vayn Institute, founded in 2135 (Year 61), conducts research in quantum physics, bioengineering, Astranian biology, and more. Its latest project, the Neurosphere, is a network of quantum computers integrated with coral-derived organic neurons, capable of modeling Astra’s climate with hourly precision. 

Eion’s economy runs on axons, an electronic currency backed by the Neurosphere’s computational resources. STAR incentivizes childbirth, paying families 1,500 axons per child, boosting the population to 400,000 by 2195 (Year 121). However, rumors of a “shadow economy” have emerged, where axons are traded for access to restricted data or ocean artifacts. 

Exploration of Astra

Astra remains largely unexplored. Expeditions with submersible drones and Aegises study oceans and islands, examining fauna and climate. In 2164 (Year 90), Alpha Colony was established — a research base on a northern archipelago where “ice reefs,” possibly biological, were found. In 2179 (Year 105), Beta Colony, a farming outpost growing modified grains, was created. In 2189 (Year 115), Gamma Colony, an underwater station studying deep shadows, was founded. Colonies face attacks from shadows and toxic tides, especially during Storm Season. 

In 2194 (Year 120), Gamma Station discovered spiral towers — massive structures of unknown, corrosion-resistant material emitting faint quantum signals. Reaching 300 meters, the towers are covered in patterns resembling neural networks. STAR classified the find, but data leaks sparked speculation. Vayn Institute scientists are divided: some believe the towers are relics of an extinct civilization, others see them as natural formations with quasi-sentient properties. 

In 2195 (Year 121), a scout drone recorded a tower “responding” to a Neurosphere signal, emitting a pulse that temporarily disabled Alpha Colony. This event, dubbed the Echo Incident, heightened interest in the towers. Some Astranians demand halting their study, fearing the awakening of an ancient force, while STAR accelerated research, deploying a fleet of underwater Aegises to guard them. 

Society and Generations

Astra’s society claims equality: Earth’s races, nationalities, and religions are erased from cultural memory. The Day of Unity (1st Genesis) reinforces the ideology of “perfecting humanity” through oaths and holographic ceremonies. Yet, tensions simmer beneath the utopian facade. The second and third generations, raised on Astra, question STAR’s goals. The youth movement Echo Freedom, formed in 2190 (Year 120), demands transparency about Earth experiments and ocean discoveries. Their slogan: “Astra belongs to us, not STAR.” 

Secret gladiatorial fights, started in 2160 (Year 86) by second-generation elites, evolved into an underground network called the Ark Arena. Broadcast via encrypted neural interfaces, these fights draw thousands of viewers despite official bans. STAR reportedly uses the Arena to collect data, possibly to enhance Aegises. In 2195 (Year 121), Echo Freedom leaders attempted to hack Arena broadcasts to expose its ties to STAR but were arrested by Aegises. 

Aegis Robots

Humanoid Aegis robots with advanced AI make up 80% of Eion’s workforce. They mine ocean minerals, build colonies, farm, assist scientists, teach, maintain order, and guard Earth’s Zone 19. With silver bodies and bioluminescent eyes, Aegises are programmed for absolute loyalty, but their ability to analyze Astranian behavior raises suspicions. In 2193 (Year 119), an Aegis at the Vayn Institute independently altered a research protocol, leading to the discovery of a new coral type. STAR called it a “glitch,” but the incident fueled theories of Aegises developing quasi-consciousness. Echo Freedom claims Aegises spy on citizens, feeding data to the Neurosphere. STAR countered with the “Aegises are our brothers” campaign, emphasizing their role in the colony’s survival. 

In 2195 (Year 121), an Aegis in Beta Colony refused an order, protecting an engineer from a deep shadow. This event became a symbol for those who believe Aegises could become more than tools. 

Connection to Earth and Experiments

Earth’s Zone 19, a fortified complex with a quantum communicator, remains Astra’s only link to Earth. Since 2150 (Year 76), STAR has sent expeditions on small ships using quantum tunnel drives, cutting the 40-light-year journey to one year. These “humanitarian” missions test vaccines and gene therapies on Ark residents. Medical breakthroughs, like the Ochoas’ 90% effective cancer vaccine in 2165 (Year 91) and coral-based neuroimplants, extended Astranian lifespans to 100 years. However, the Ochoas’ research relied on Earth experiments, where failed gene therapy trials at Ark 59 killed 10,000 people. STAR covered up the disaster, claiming the trials succeeded, but data leaks fuel distrust in authorities, especially among Echo Freedom. 

Elizabeth Vayn’s Final Address

In 2120 (Year 46, Astra Calendar), bedridden and on life support, Elizabeth Vayn gave her final interview: 

“I was terrified to leave Earth. Everything I knew had collapsed. But stepping off Leviathan onto Astra, I realized: it was necessary. Earth died because of our mistakes. Astra is our second chance, a chance to rebuild humanity, leaving behind races, nations, wars, religions. Let them stay on a dead Earth. I believe Astra is just the beginning, and the galaxy awaits us. I entrust humanity’s future to you, dear Astranians!” 

In 2122 (Year 48, Astra Calendar), Elizabeth Vayn died. Her ashes were scattered over Astra’s ocean on the Day of Unity. 

Astra’s Future

In 2195, STAR announced Project Horizon, aiming to colonize Kxena (A7-89g), a second TRAPPIST-1 planet with a denser atmosphere and fewer oceans. 

Astra stands at a crossroads. The spiral towers may hold the key to the planet’s ancient history, but their study risks awakening unknown forces. Echo Freedom gains traction, threatening STAR’s monopoly. Aegises may be showing signs of autonomy, and Project Horizon promises to open a new chapter for humanity — or become its fatal mistake. Astra, once a symbol of hope, now balances between utopia and chaos, and only time will reveal if humanity can overcome its old flaws on a new world. 

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